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Frank Seymour, a 22 year old from Toronto, has been lost and alone in the North American wilderness for three months. Cold, and with winter approaching quickly, Frank begins to see things out of the corner of his vision. To make matters worse, something seems to be stalking him, and between the freezing temperatures and the loneliness, Frank feels like he's going insane. Is it his imagination, or is there someone or something else in the mountains with him?
A lot shorter this time, I'm hoping it makes it easier to read. Hopefully you enjoy it, I intend to keep these chapters shorter than the last. Criticism is welcome, and any mistakes you find, don't be scared to point them out! (Keeping it mature for strong language, just to be safe.)
Next chapter here: connor18.deviantart.com/art/Bi…
A lot shorter this time, I'm hoping it makes it easier to read. Hopefully you enjoy it, I intend to keep these chapters shorter than the last. Criticism is welcome, and any mistakes you find, don't be scared to point them out! (Keeping it mature for strong language, just to be safe.)
Next chapter here: connor18.deviantart.com/art/Bi…
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Very suspenseful!! Loved every minute of it, very good ending leaving the reader wanting more. I only saw one mistake, the word "the" was missing a "t", but the story was so captivating that after I read past it I completely forgot about it and I can't seem to find it again. I will defiantly be reading the other chapters